Order # 9551

申请目标

目标学校

Target University

UCLA UCI UCSD

目标学位

Target Degree

Bachelor Degree

目标专业

Target Major

Sociology

目标老师（申请PHD客户填写）

Target Professor

高中基本资料 （请申请Undergraduate School申请者填写）

High school students basic information

高中学校及就读时间

My high school and the duration

高中期间的平均成绩以及年级排名（百分制以及您所计算的GPA）

GPA in 100-point system and 4-point(or other point) system, such as 88/100; 3.6/4.0; Rank 12/513

您在高中阶段最擅长的课程和原因

List the subjects that you are good at and briefly explain the reasons.

本科基本资料 （请申请Master 或 Phd 申请者填写）

Undergraduate students Basic information

本科学校/院系及就读时间

My undergraduate school/department and the duration

专业（如有第二专业，也请注明）

Major (If you have/had a minor, please specify also )

本科平均成绩及年级排名（百分制以及您所计算的GPA）

[Major] GPA in 100-point system and 4-point(or other point) system, such as 88/100; 3.6/4.0 ; Rank 12/513

您认为对您申请的专业有用的核心课程名称以及分数（百分制以及您所计算的GPA，请勿超过10项）：

The courses related to your intended study area

Please specify the course name and the corresponding grades (Item limit: 10)

研究生基本资料 （请研究生学生申请Master 或 Phd 填写）

Graduate students Basic information

研究生学校/院系及就读时间

My Graduate school/department and the duration

在上述学校就读过的专业（如果有辅修专业，也请注明）

Major (If you have/had a minor, please specify also )

研究生期间的主修及辅修专业综合平均成绩以及年级排名（百分制以及您所计算的GPA）：

[Major] GPA in 100-point system and 4-point(or other point) system, such as 88/100; 3.6/4.0 Rank 12/513

您认为对您申请的专业有用的核心课程名称以及分数（百分制以及您所计算的GPA，请勿超过10项）：

The courses related to your intended study area

Please specify the course name and the corresponding grades (Item limit: 10)

工作基本资料 （有工作经历者申请Undergraduate, Master 或 Phd 填写）

曾任职的公司

Companies you worked in

职位及工作内容

Your position and working content

工作成果

Your achievements in work

工作经历为您带来的优势

What strength or advantages you get in your work experience

工作后选择继续深造的理由

Why do you choose to pursue a new degree

综合资料填写

1我的交换学生经历 （选填） My experience as an exchange student (Optional)

学校及专业 University/College and major

交流时间：Exchange duration

交流期间我所选修的核心课程（请中英文对照填写）：The courses I take/took:

我在交流期间的收获（150字为限）

What I gain there as an exchange student? (word limit: 150 words)

2申请专业信息 (Information of major applying)

您欲申请的专业是什么？您最感兴趣的方向是什么（请按照先后顺序分条列出）。

(What majors and subplans are you interested in? Please list in order of preference.)

Sociology

您有没有特别感兴趣的学校和教授？(Do you have any preferred university or professor?)

请附上相关的英文网站链接

UCI UCSD

您认为您申请最大优势和弱势是什么？

(What is the biggest advantage and disadvantage to apply for graduate study?)

I used to study some sociology courses back in china, so I can study a project or topic by comparing and combining with Asian’s sight and American’s view together.

如何看待您将要申请的这个专业的前景？您的学习计划，毕业后的职业目标？您认为自己在这个专业的发展前景怎样？(What is your study plan, including your purpose, goal and your career goal after graduation?)

I want to be a critic in new media era, for example, a youtuber maybe.

您为什么选择这个专业（欲申请的专业）？您为什么适合就读将要申请的这个专业？对所申请专业的兴趣出发点源于何处？(Why you choose this major? Please tell us your proposed program? How do/did I gain the professional interest for my intended study area?)

My uncle is a sociologist. Every time when a family party was held, we always talked about things happened recently on society, and my uncle always can point out the key part of the problem and tell me what to do is proper and good to other people.

您的专业兴趣是否受到其它因素的影响？ (Is there any other factors that influence your interest in the program?)

（选填）如果所申请的专业与本科专业不一致，谈谈想要申请该专业的原因。以及打算如何克服跨专业申请的困难的？

(If it is different from the major you have, please explain why you want to transfer to the new program, and how you plan to conquer the expected difficulties?)

3简单介绍我的性格 A brief description of my personality :

I have been a stage person since I was in primary school. The first time I went in front of people was on an English class. My English teacher taught a fairy tale called “Jack and Beanstalk” and asked us to perform it. The group I was in was complimented by the all class. That was the first time I stand in front of people to express my thoughts, my idea, my happiness, myself. Nowadays, I have become a good host and amateur actor. I played leader actor in the school play, I hosted the graduation party, furthermore I hosted a basketball competition at Staples Center. But all these experience cannot compare to the joy by standing on the stage and making audience happy.

4我的座右铭是什么？我崇拜的偶像是谁（以及他/她的简单介绍）?

My motto? The idols I worship? (A brief introduction of him/her will be appreciated )

Ellan DeGeneres. Follow your passion, stay true to yourself.

5下面是我在所申请专业的相关工作和项目经历。（毕业论文除外）

在这些工作和项目经历中我具体做了什么工作，怎样做的？

在这些工作和项目经历中最让我难忘的是什么；挑战有那些？我是如何应对的？

（请尽量使用英文填写）

The following is about relevant professional experience and project work.

What were your concrete tasks in those professional experiences and project works?

How did you accomplish them?

What was the most memorable story when you were facing those challenges?

注：此处主要填写和老师一起进行课题的研究经历、实习经历，其它对申请有利的专业相关经历也请写在下一项里。已经工作的申请者，也请在此处加上和申请有关的工作经历。

研究经历要写清楚起止时间、课题名称、导师姓名职称、自己负责何种工作。最好能附上导师的简历或者写出导师的主要成就及著作.

工作经历要写清楚起止时间，公司名称，自己负责何种工作及主要功绩等。

在提供这些素材的时候，请从以下几方面考虑，将最全面的情况整理出来：

1. 项目的基本情况介绍，包括基本目标，内容，过程，以及结果影响力等；

2. 您的工作职位是什么，都参与了哪些具体的工作；

3. 工作中面临哪些困难和挑战，如何解决？

4. 工作获得了哪方面的成就，最好有具体的数据说明；

5. 工作成就获得了哪方面的评价，包括同事/同学与上司/导师的？

6. 总结，工作感想如何，哪方面的能力和素质得到了提高？

6本科（研究生）毕业论文/设计。(Your graduation thesis/design during undergraduate (graduate) period.)

注：包括起止时间、课题名称、导师姓名职称、自己负责何种工作、自己的idea, 取得什么成绩以及获得何种奖励，比如校级优秀毕业论文等等。如已发表或将要发表，请写清楚作者、题目、所发表刊物或会议名称、页码、时间。

请根据以下建议，整理下毕业论文材料，最好能够将实际数据也写清楚，以便文书写作：

1. 论文选题的背景以及动机；

2. 论文的写作过程与主要内容；

3. 论文解决的实际问题，或者就现实问题提出什么样的解决方案；

4. 论文获得了什么样的评价，最好提供参评老师的评语；

5. 总结，完成论文以后，哪方面的能力和素质得到了锻炼与提高。

7. 描述我的团队经验，我怎样和其它研究人员或同学配合的？在团队中担当怎样的角色？

Describe the team experience you have/had.

How did you interact with your fellow researchers and classmates?

I have been in many groups and clubs. After experiencing various shows, I summarize four components to hold a good activity: idea, team, timing and action. I call it “I.T.T.A”. And the best activity I think I have held, the graduation party of my high school, also includes these 4 factors. First, a good idea is the start of everything. I and my school mates always wanted a different and big show to commemorate our 3-year high school life. So I decided to make our graduation party like a series of TV shows. We could make the singing part like a sing competition, make the plays like the TV series and make the commercial be the fun part. It turned out to be a great idea. Our team was a great team. Everyone in it wanted to produce a perfect ending of high school life. The timing does not only mean to catch the chance, but also means the schedule. As the leader director of the party, I set a clear and strict schedule which should include everyone’s work and due date. Last but not the least, you must make sure the action were taken.

8（选填）我感觉我的本科（研究生）成绩过低而不足以体现学术资质和努力程度，这个原因是由于（学校评分严格，分数不高但排名高，或其他解释方法）？

(Optional)You may be underestimated in academic aptitude and endeavor because of your low undergraduate (graduate) GPA; can you give any reasonable explanations for that?

9我在大学（研究生）期间重要的奖励和突出成就，这些包括学术性的和非学术性的，以及我印象深刻的奖项和原因（英文填写）

Please list the awards and the achievements you have during the college life, including the academic and non-academic ones. (in English)

10（选填）如果有论文或者专著发表，请列出发表论文、期刊，简介所发刊物内容、期刊名、机构名(出版商)、内容、对未来方向的影响和工作态度的具体事例，请提供正确的英文专有名词供我们参考。

研究论文方向内容跟申请科系之间关系阐述 (研究的目的，研究具体方法，研究所用仪器名称，研究主要步骤，研究结果)，研究的意义等；以及具体研究专题的内容，具体仪器操作步骤，完成专题论文中间过程表现学术水平。

（请使用英文填写，请直接附上重要文章的英文摘要）

List the publications you have or will have, including the full title of the article, journal/book name, and a brief introduction of the content.

How will these works contribute to your application for the intended study area?

Please also provide the terminology in English for our reference.

(In English. If possible, attach the absract below.).

11是否遇到重大挫折以及如何克服？(Did you meet any frustration during your studies? And how did you overcome it?) 可以不局限于学习方面

M.T.P (Million Tree Project) was the most unforgettable project I have joined. By planting trees in Inner Mongolia, the M.T.P is designed to improve both ecological and humanitarian conditions there. The individuals and organizations that involved plant trees by donation.In my high school, I organized a charity bazaar to support M.T.P.

How to attract people to get interested in this project and make them believe their tiny little help does matter becomes a problem. I made a short film about reforesting the area in order to revitalize the land and block the sandstorms. After students’ watching during the charity sale, I could know from their face that they were moved. And finally, we raised about 100 trees for about 2,500 Chinese yuan. I know it is a small number compared to a million, but there are so many of us and gathering all these small numbers would become a bigger one. With luck, I even had the opportunity to go to Inner Mongolia to plant trees with my own hands. And there is also a tree named by my name standing with millions of trees came from millions of people like me to protect the sandstorms.

12您参加的社会实践，假期实习，社团，学生会经历

Your experience in the social practice, vacation practice, student associations and student union. 

I came from China and I love that land where I was born in and spent my former 20 years on it. But nowadays, China, this ancient land, is suffering the side effects by the explosive industrial development, pollution and desertification of land. So I joined “Roots & Shoots” when I was in high school. “Roots & Shoots” is a non-profit organization with the goal of bringing together youth from preschool to university age to work on environment, conservation and humanitarian issues.

13 我未来的学习和职业规划：

My future study plan and the career plan:

I plan to finish my further university study in 2 years. In last half year in university, I plan to find an internship. On the other hand, I plan to open a personal channel on Youtube, Facebook and such mass social media to apply and testify what I have learned.

14 我对文章的开头的要求或者建议，任何想法皆可：

My suggestions for the beginning of the essay. All kinds of thoughts are welcome.

Anything. As long as it help.

15（选填）额外资料收集区Additional information（一切可以展示个人能力的资料）

16 想对我们的编辑说些什么？（以上问题没有涵盖，而您认为很重要需要补充的素材也可以填写在这里）

请在最后留下您的中文姓名和紧急联络电话。

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