robbing the dead

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COMPETENCY 1

Articulate ethical issues in health care.

CRITERION

Articulate the moral concerns surrounding a policy of organ conscription.

Your result: Basic

Distinguished

Analyzes the moral concerns surrounding a policy of organ conscription, and compares and contrasts examples of organ donation policies.

Proficient

Articulates the moral concerns surrounding a policy of organ conscription.

Basic

Articulates the moral concerns surrounding a policy of organ conscription, but in an unclear, incomplete, or inaccurate manner.

Non-Performance

Does not articulate the moral concerns surrounding a policy of organ conscription.

Faculty Comments:

I appreciate that you've developed this a bit more here!

CRITERION

Articulate questions about the fairness and justness of organ conscription policy.

Your result: Basic

Distinguished

Evaluates questions about the fairness and justness of organ conscription policy, and recommends strategies for increasing public acceptance.

Proficient

Articulates questions about the fairness and justness of organ conscription policy.

Basic

Articulates questions about the fairness and justness of organ conscription policy, but in an unclear, incomplete, or inaccurate manner.

Non-Performance

Does not articulate questions about the fairness and justness of organ conscription policy

Faculty Comments:

Make sure that you understand what "conscription" means and then you can address the issue of justness here. It may be that your grammar is getting in the way of communicating your message. I encourage you to use the writing center.

CRITERION

Explain the relevance and significance of the concept of consent as it pertains to organ donation.

Your result: Proficient

Distinguished

Explains the relevance and significance of the concept of consent as it pertains to organ donation, and describes consequences when donor consent is absent.

Proficient

Explains the relevance and significance of the concept of consent as it pertains to organ donation.

Basic

Explains the relevance and significance of the concept of consent as it pertains to organ donation, but in an unclear, incomplete, or inaccurate manner.

Non-Performance

Does not explain the relevance and significance of the concept of consent as it pertains to organ donation.

Faculty Comments:

No change from previous score / submission

CRITERION

Evaluate alternative policies for increasing available donor organs.

Your result: Basic

Distinguished

Evaluates alternative policies for increasing available donor organs, and describes consequences of continued donor organ shortages.

Proficient

Evaluates alternative policies for increasing available donor organs.

Basic

Evaluates alternative policies for increasing available donor organs, but in an unclear, incomplete, or inaccurate manner.

Non-Performance

Does not evaluate alternative policies for increasing available donor organs.

Faculty Comments:

Essentially, you're advocating education and discussion... is there anything else one can do to increase the availability of organs?

COMPETENCY 2

Apply in text the standard writing conventions for the discipline, including structure, voice, person, tone, and citation formatting.

CRITERION

Exhibit proficiency in clear and effective academic writing skills.

Your result: Proficient

Distinguished

Exhibits proficiency in clear and effective academic writing skills, and ensures the writing reflects the quality and expertise expected of a professional.

Proficient

Exhibits proficiency in clear and effective academic writing skills.

Basic

Writes in an ineffective and inconsistent manner that does not exhibit effective academic writing skills or deliver the message clearly.

Non-Performance

Does not exhibit proficiency in clear and effective academic writing skills.

Faculty Comments:

No change from previous score / submission