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Abdullah 

 1. Three subjects that could make into a Public Awareness Persuasive essay

a.       Human needs not apply

b.      The Terrifying Truth About Bananas

c.       How to Win an Election

            2.Two most promising subjects that could make into a Public Awareness Persuasive essay

a.       human needs not apply

Have you ever wondered the future controlled by robots and automated machines when the needs humans will not apply. This is a very interesting subject for public awareness essay. With the current and increased automation of various activities, I can only wonder what the future holds for humanity. One of the most interesting thing about this topic is that the public is not aware of the impending takeover by robots and automated machines. The pros of pursuing this topic is that there numerous sources that provide enough information to cover this topic. There are not many cons in regards to this topic but there is a lot of information and it will take time to assess and pinpoint the right information for this topic.

b.      How to win an Election

As the United States goes to election this year, this is a very important subject. We are living in a time where this year’s election will determine the future of the United States and in another way the future of the world. The most interesting this about this subject is that people and candidates do not know the different things they require so that they can win an election. The pro of pursuing this subject is that there is enough information on the internet and books at my disposal. The con of this topic is to come up with the right and practical pointers on how to win an election despite having a lot of information to use.

3.            3.The more promising of the two subjects; Human needs not apply

‘Human needs not apply’ is the more promising subjects of the two. There are numerous aspects to handle this subject because it is a broad topic. First, I will define what it means in regards to robots and automation of human activities. I will then look at the human activities that have been replaced by automated machines and robots. Additionally, I will highlight some industries that initially employed humans now use automated machines. I will includes statistics that will show the number of humans that have been replaced by machines. I will highlight on some of the effects both positive and negative brought about by use of automated machines. I will finally try to paint a future of how the world will be after everything is automated and when human needs not apply.

juliaann

1) elder abuse, athletic benefits of dance, animal abuse

2) Animal abuse is a topic that people don't think about a lot because animals get hit around a little bit. Some people don't realize how bad animal abuse really is. People starve their animals, beat them, lock the up and even kill them. People that don't have animals don't really see how the interactions with animals really are. Animals are abused everyday and some animals are killed. People just over look animal abuse because people don't think of animals as humans just animals. And people think if its not a person getting hurt when its not really that important. 

Athletic benefits of dance is a topic that not a lot of people know about. People think that dance it not a sport but just an activity. Dance is a lot more than a activity it's a sport and an art. People overlook dance because not everyone can dance, it doesn't matter if you can dance. Dance can help you emotionally, so if you're having a bad bad dance and music helps that. Everyone loves to dance even if it is just a little jig. Dancing is a very difficult sport to be a part of, but it’s such a beautiful art to be a part of.   

3) Dance is a lot of things to different people, but it’s such a beautiful art to be a part of. I believe that dance is a difficult sport, but a beautiful piece of art. Dance is a very easy way to exercise and to workout. Dance is also very good for emotional problems that you're having in your life. People don’t see dance as sport and I think that dance is harder than a lot of other sports. Dance is very usually overlook at some times because people see it as a activity and not even close to a sport.