Short Sections

 

 I did some editing and reworking because I pasted everything you sent into the new template that the department is now using.  I was able to move your writing around to fill in the section required.  You had most of it but I just had to hunt and find it.  I used some of what I saw in your appendices.  Looked like Taj had given you an outline and you filled in the questions.  I thought the material was excellent and used a lot of it to add to what you wrote.

 

You need to do  about 3 or so short sections that are needed for the new template.  I suggested that you look at the sample proposal I sent you for the data gathering and data analysis sections and Don Stone’s paper on Validity for the 2 sections on validity: you already did the first section on validity, but needed beefing up and the other that still needed to be done.