Rogerium Essay

State your proposed thesis statement for this topic. Remember, your thesis statement is a complete sentence.Todays population both young and old are becoming too dependent on technology and smartphones.

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List a peer-reviewed source that you plan to use in this essay. You must show both an in-text and a works cited citation for this source. *Note: To receive credit for this question, the source must be peer-reviewed and correctly cited (a hanging indent is not required to receive credit).From Science News for Students

Technology & Engineering

Watch out: Cell phones can be addictive

Too much dependence on your smartphone isn’t smart

By Kathiann Kowalski 8:37am, September 17, 2014 



Work Cited:

Kowalski, Kathiann. Watch Out: Cell Phones Can Be Addictive. Student Science. N.p., 17 Sept. 2014. Web. 13 May 2016. https://student.societyforscience.org/article/watch-out-cell-phones-can-be-addictive. 

Nice, but you left off the sentence with the in-text citation :)

Give a tentative outline for your essay. Remember, your essay must have the following components: introduction and claim, background, the opposition (given without bias), claim, warrants for both your claim and the opposition, the common ground between your claim and the opposition, the conclusion. Clarify these components in your outline. Your outline may be a topic or sentence outline.Thesis:Todays population both young and old are becoming too dependent on technology.

Intro/claim: I am going to mention about why todays society is too dependent on technology and why

Background: I am going to state facts about some studies done on the use of technology today. 

Opposition: Why younger populous does not see this as dependency.

Conclusion: Sum up the reasons of the dependency issue  

Fabulous, but remember to only write in the third person for the essay.