revision essay

ESSAY REVISION: Engage in deep revision of one graded formal essay you think could benefit from substantial revision (this will probably be the essay you believe needs the most work). Revise the essay, going beyond mere surface editing (correcting typos and grammar errors) to make meaningful changes to content. Content changes include integrating additional sources, reorganizing paragraphs and smoothing transitions, or rewriting sections for clarity.  Apply the feedback I have given you.  If you received an A on all the essays, you do not have to complete the revision process; you can elect to do so if you wish to improve your overall portfolio grade, but it will not change your grade on the original essay.  If you revise an essay adequately, I will revise the original grade you received on that essay.