Revised Helen Keller

Revise paper using these suggestions

You should expand on the preventative measures (see the rubric).  You have grammar mistakes, which are problematic, especially for a graduate level paper -- You should proofread carefully. For example, you wrote:  “...correctly. how an eye normally works…”  You need to expand on your topics and your literature searching – where are the references from the annotated bibliography? There are some APA formatting issues – I suggest reviewing APA formatting for references.  Also, be aware that bulleted lists are to be avoided in APA papers.

Please use all annotated bibliography

Check rubric to heko guide papaer