revise ( journalism homework)

 This is a feature story on Nila Haran- a bridal make up artist specialized in South Asian bridal make ups.

 There's not much instructions from the editor, however, the story is required to be no more than 800 words so it has to be shorten a little bit.

 We are lunching a South Asian Wedding magazine and the story is going to be on it.

 Please fix the grammar mistakes and maybe change the structure of story so that it can be more smooth.

 It's not an essay so we don't need a format.

 Thanks :)