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Revise your Week 1 assignment to address instructor critique and peer interaction in the discussion forums.

This assignment "builds" on your week one paper and should continue to grow in content and revisions as you move through the research process developing your paper.  This is your opportunity to construct the paper and get points for it.  When complete with all assignments at the end of week seven, your paper will be nearly completed for week 8.  I would expect to see and read in the week two assignment paper greater content than week 1, and less composition and format errors noted in week one.  I strongly urge everyone to mature your paper by at least 20-25%.