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 Towards the bottom of the second page is when you start to focus on the advertising techniques which is what I wanted the paper to focus on so that is good. There are a few things to possibly revise. Remember that you needed to reference two of the articles we read in class (Kilbourne, Lutz, and Cross). Also, try not to end paragraphs with references. Add analysis to explain how the evidence relates to your claim or thesis. 

 

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