Final Draft Paper

Just improve what has already been done. Attached is also the Rubric witht the score at the bottom. I would like these scores to be higher.

It's time to submit the final draft of your persuasive essay. At this point, your course faculty member has returned to you the graded first draft of the assignment, as well as some insightful feedback.

For this assignment, consider all the feedback you've received on your first draft, including feedback from the Online Writing Lab, and submit your 3-4 page persuasive essay based on the following criteria:

• An introduction paragraph with a thesis statement.
• Three body paragraphs that each focus on a separate supporting idea.
• A concluding paragraph that summarizes your main idea and provides a call to action.
• A properly formatted reference page in APA style.
• Careful proofreading for grammar, mechanics, and spelling.
• Applied revision and editing strategies to strengthen the essay.