essay needs some changes

mojahed44

I will attatch my essay and two references. 

This is the comment from my prof on the essay: 

Your paper looks pretty good!  Things to work on:  the thesis statement--what is the overall point you want to make about the poem?

conclusion--don't just restate what you have already said.  Try to answer the question, "Why does this matter?" in that last paragraph

body paragraphs--these look good.  They could use additional support from the poem (maybe one more quotation in each body paragraph)

 

 

 

 

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