Essay edit

Name of the course is organizational development. That essay has been written by a student 4 months ago and I am taking the same class right now. I will also submit that essay and that means the essay will be send to the Instructor for one more time. I need you to change the every first sentence of the paragraphs and fix the mistake those are highlighted with yellow color. You need to change that work to make it the instructor will not understand it. Thanks.