editing

I have three essays i need some one to read it and write some comments on it.

it can be a compliment ,grammer mistake correction  sentence correctionan advise to make better idea ....etc. or something you thing it should be writen in deffrent way .

I need atleast 5 comments in each essay

I attached the three essays that you need to work in+ example to give you an idea on what you doiing.please check itt

his need to be done in 8 hours.

make sure to combine between compliment and corrections

also comment need to be clear and understandable.