Description essay

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I have an assignment due to today it is a description essay.

 

write about a place that have emotional impact on you 

 

instruactions:

1) 5 paragraphs

2) do not use I or YOU

3) a good thesis statement

4)each paragraph 10 sentences at least

6)I want it to be done in 7 hours from now

 

I already wrote some informations about the place in the first sentence 

what i want you to do is to complete the essay using the informations from the first paragraph and rewrite the first paragraph in a good way.

 

this is what I wrote 

 

My grandparent’s house

 

My grandparent’s house is located in the countryside north of the capital city of Saudi Arabia. As every one know there are pros and cons of living in the countryside and one of the pros is the clean environment out of the crowded city. Usually the houses in the countryside are large and that house is one of them.  Every house in there will have a farm, swimming pool and some of them have their own pen for their farm animals. Like any other grandparents house all the family gets together on the vacations in that house. There are a lot of rooms, which will make the house enough for our big family, and there are a lot of things that every one can enjoy. Far away from the crowded city and from all the technology every one can enjoy swimming in the pool, walking in the gardens and the farm, meditate on the nature, or having some coffee while chatting with other family members. Because of having the farm and growing all the vegetables and fruits in the house farm every meal cooked in there is organic, even the meat or chicken is locally grown in the same farm. That is why my grandparent’s house is the place of happiness.

 

don't forget to follow the instructions 

I want it to be done in 7 hours from now

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