correction #2

I need you to correct the following highlighted areas.

Essentially, healthcare----- (I get the point of this sentence, but it reads a little confusing.)

I need to research a dissertation proposal where the researcher was an insider/ collaborator and give evidence why this will not make me bias

Section 2.5

• I work for the VA hospital but will not be conducting my research in my department. I will be conducting research in primary care.

• I need an example of a a policy to back my argument up.